Art-trade human

Vision: I can see a lot of things,Love the coloring. But.. I can't really see the smile and the skin outline. Other than that I love it.

Originality nothing much to say here other than it's nice c:

Technique love how you used outlined with a darker color, thought I would of liked the sweater to have been a separable color, but it's still fine.

Nothing really for Impact

Other tips:
Move the smile down a little or move the chin up.
Also the shoulders should be a up a bit and Broder, but not like a man's and rounded a bit at the end.

Other than that Keep up the good work!